becanne 4 and beyond

category: general [glöplog]
I'm volunteering to correct a prood-read/correct a few articles for the next edition, I guess.

added on the 2005-02-18 12:14:08 by superplek superplek
yeh, prood read away!
Rasmus there's cattle mooing up your ear!
added on the 2005-02-18 16:43:27 by superplek superplek
I wished I had not written my article in a hurry (and a long time after BCN Party actually)... things got pretty "wrong" at work, and I had promised the article, so I did it, but could not proofread (my own) English or write it thinking what I was actually writing.

Plus, my English is VERY far from perfect, but could have definitely been better for the article.

Anyway, I hope everything is, at least, understandable :-)
added on the 2005-02-18 17:28:19 by Jcl Jcl
I think we (the ones that wrote for this becanne issue) have made a great effort to write our best English - but as if we had written in Spanish... it's SO possible that we have mispellings. It would be nice to have someone like Niels helping in the task of grammatical/syntactical correction. Usually we have humphrey and his inquisitive eyes but this time he was not able to take an in-depth look to the articles :-/
and yes... I think it is understandable... which in my opinion is the really important thing! no more guessing about the text when looking at the pictures in becanne!!! \o/
jcl: im quite curious how you managed to meet me on the first night if i only came to the partyplace on the second day =) "there is the theory of the moebius, a twist in the fabric of space where time becomes a loop"
added on the 2005-02-18 23:04:09 by psenough psenough
i did offer to humphrey to proofread it before it went out, he never asked me to do it -_- oh well, it has a more realistic spanish flavour this way :p
added on the 2005-02-18 23:05:27 by psenough psenough
ps: of course, you were there... you just didn't know :)

Seriously, there's a lot of missing information and mistaken one there (hopefully more missing than mistaken), I did my best, but still not enough... i swear I did the article in the biggest of my hurries, lacking time and stressed enough for it... but I promised (while circumstances were absolutely different) I'd do it... and by the time I should have said 'I can't do it', it was too late, so I did it anyway.

The report is probably not 100% correct, and again, has missing infoz (which I could write now that I read it again), but still, the 'idea' is pretty ok and facts are more or less right, I didn't "make up" anything on purpose (just confused memories ;) )

This is what happens when you can't trust someone to write a decent party report \o/

Hope you all liked the report anyway :)
added on the 2005-02-19 07:26:30 by Jcl Jcl
hooray for javi! \o/
jcl: it was nice :)
added on the 2005-02-19 18:36:29 by psenough psenough